Her unnoticed silent smiles,
Went unseen under the indivisible sky,
Raindrops fell in the form of open verse,
As she dreamed with a transparent eye....
12.02.2009
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An imperfect mix of bassline and Windy City hope / Convenient store jokes seen through a gutter dwellers telescope...
"As she dreamed with a transparent eye...."
ReplyDeleteThese seven words and four dots (ha)
Speak loudly, I don't know who you are speaking of, but I feel like I understand her in this line.